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ed31 · 21-10-2009, 06:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Nutter

Little too much glow. It makes if a bit difficult to see.
Also, it looks like he's kind of static, as if there is no movement.

Not sure how you could adjust that.
Still, it's looking good and the layout is nice.

i agree with this ! and yes it still looks really good.

mccolli · 21-10-2009, 01:29 PM

right my latest is something a bit different for me. I decided to make my first wallpaper even though im still struggling with signatures

except for the font looking dodgy im happy with the outcome for my first attempt if id planned for it to be a wallpaper before i started i would of got some better fonts but the moment carried me and away and here is the outcome please could you give me feedback on it.

ayvee1 · 21-10-2009, 02:15 PM

Thats really good actually. The player is blended in nicely and I like the colours. The only thing I would change is the text.

mccolli · 21-10-2009, 02:27 PM

double post sorry

mccolli · 21-10-2009, 02:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ayvee1

Thats really good actually. The player is blended in nicely and I like the colours. The only thing I would change is the text.

tar mate

im the exact same thinking as you really wish i had better choice in text lol would make it look alot better but for my first 1 im really happy

OptiMAT prime · 21-10-2009, 03:01 PM

Yeah, same. The text kind of lets it down. Not everything even needs text. We can kind of see it's a player and stuff, so it doesnt really need text all over him telling him who he is. Although if you still feel the need to use text, try arranging it a bit better so that it's not straight across and really long.

Here's 4 new things from me; 3 of which were possible showcase attempt type things, but I gave up on them now.

BonesMa · 21-10-2009, 03:14 PM

Loving the modern tag with half blue and white.

Latest tags made from a LP vector I made:

Also made a logo for a friend:

MorinKAshi 80 · 21-10-2009, 06:39 PM

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Originally Posted by BonesMa

Loving the modern tag with half blue and white.

Latest tags made from a LP vector I made:

AKIRA!

Love the Manga, and these sigs as well!
Do one with him on his bike!

BonesMa · 21-10-2009, 08:16 PM

No but I can do you one easily.

Ill work on it and message you.

Scarffo · 21-10-2009, 08:30 PM

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Originally Posted by OptiMAT prime

Yeah, same. The text kind of lets it down. Not everything even needs text. We can kind of see it's a player and stuff, so it doesnt really need text all over him telling him who he is. Although if you still feel the need to use text, try arranging it a bit better so that it's not straight across and really long.

Here's 4 new things from me; 3 of which were possible showcase attempt type things, but I gave up on them now.

Everything you're doing is just getting better and better, Mat. I actually can't believe how creative you are. I particularly love the second "modern" one.

Idle-Joe · 21-10-2009, 09:07 PM

Fantastic work

Comments please?:

OptiMAT prime · 21-10-2009, 09:22 PM

Personally mate i think they're all rubbish! haha! But I honestly appreciate the sentiment.

Idle-Joe, i have the strange feeling of deja-vu with that one. Not insinuating that youve ripped it but the style and layout etc. is extremely familiar.

mccolli · 21-10-2009, 09:25 PM

k my latest is a sort of post card design (yet its to big) i just saw the picture and loved it so thought i would try to make a post card out of it. what are your opinions.

stock :

finish :

OptiMAT prime · 21-10-2009, 09:30 PM

I think an easy way to make it look more like a postcard would be to use more postcard-like proportions.

mccolli · 21-10-2009, 09:42 PM

i edited the size now so except for the size could you tell me the criticisms of what im doing or what im doing right.

OptiMAT prime · 21-10-2009, 09:45 PM

It's proportions, not size. Your "postcard" is almost square, and they're never like that. Just look at some internet examples and you'll see what i mean. Other than that, it's okay. I'd've gone less with "smoke" and more with just a more vibrant sunset, maybe make the light beams a bit wider too, but there's not much to add to a postcard because postcards are usually just like they are in real life, no editing necessary.

EAUK_Aurora · 21-10-2009, 11:25 PM

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21-10-2009, 01:29 PM	#25327 (permalink)
mccolli Elite Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Wirral Age: 16 Gender: Male Posts: 5,869	right my latest is something a bit different for me. I decided to make my first wallpaper even though im still struggling with signatures except for the font looking dodgy im happy with the outcome for my first attempt if id planned for it to be a wallpaper before i started i would of got some better fonts but the moment carried me and away and here is the outcome please could you give me feedback on it. __________________

21-10-2009, 02:15 PM	#25328 (permalink)
ayvee1 Elite Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Inverness Age: 19 Gender: Male Posts: 6,573	Thats really good actually. The player is blended in nicely and I like the colours. The only thing I would change is the text. __________________ Nordschleife - 6:25.960 Pagani Zonda R

21-10-2009, 02:27 PM	#25329 (permalink)
mccolli Elite Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Wirral Age: 16 Gender: Male Posts: 5,869	double post sorry __________________

21-10-2009, 03:01 PM	#25331 (permalink)
OptiMAT prime Elite Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Cybertron Age: 20 Gender: Male Posts: 7,478 Blog Entries: 7	Yeah, same. The text kind of lets it down. Not everything even needs text. We can kind of see it's a player and stuff, so it doesnt really need text all over him telling him who he is. Although if you still feel the need to use text, try arranging it a bit better so that it's not straight across and really long. Here's 4 new things from me; 3 of which were possible showcase attempt type things, but I gave up on them now. __________________ Javelin Kills. Because something that big has to be worth shooting.

21-10-2009, 03:14 PM	#25332 (permalink)
BonesMa Rookie Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 98	Loving the modern tag with half blue and white. Latest tags made from a LP vector I made: Also made a logo for a friend: __________________

21-10-2009, 08:16 PM	#25334 (permalink)
BonesMa Rookie Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 98	No but I can do you one easily. Ill work on it and message you. __________________

21-10-2009, 09:07 PM	#25336 (permalink)
Idle-Joe Rookie Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Stevenage Gender: Male Posts: 65	Fantastic work Comments please?: __________________ Everything is practice. ~Pele~

21-10-2009, 09:22 PM	#25337 (permalink)
OptiMAT prime Elite Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Cybertron Age: 20 Gender: Male Posts: 7,478 Blog Entries: 7	Personally mate i think they're all rubbish! haha! But I honestly appreciate the sentiment. Idle-Joe, i have the strange feeling of deja-vu with that one. Not insinuating that youve ripped it but the style and layout etc. is extremely familiar. __________________ Javelin Kills. Because something that big has to be worth shooting.

21-10-2009, 09:25 PM	#25338 (permalink)
mccolli Elite Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Wirral Age: 16 Gender: Male Posts: 5,869	k my latest is a sort of post card design (yet its to big) i just saw the picture and loved it so thought i would try to make a post card out of it. what are your opinions. stock : finish : __________________ Last edited by mccolli; 21-10-2009 at 09:39 PM..

21-10-2009, 09:30 PM	#25339 (permalink)
OptiMAT prime Elite Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Cybertron Age: 20 Gender: Male Posts: 7,478 Blog Entries: 7	I think an easy way to make it look more like a postcard would be to use more postcard-like proportions. __________________ Javelin Kills. Because something that big has to be worth shooting.

21-10-2009, 09:42 PM	#25340 (permalink)
mccolli Elite Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Wirral Age: 16 Gender: Male Posts: 5,869	i edited the size now so except for the size could you tell me the criticisms of what im doing or what im doing right. __________________

21-10-2009, 09:45 PM	#25341 (permalink)
OptiMAT prime Elite Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Cybertron Age: 20 Gender: Male Posts: 7,478 Blog Entries: 7	It's proportions, not size. Your "postcard" is almost square, and they're never like that. Just look at some internet examples and you'll see what i mean. Other than that, it's okay. I'd've gone less with "smoke" and more with just a more vibrant sunset, maybe make the light beams a bit wider too, but there's not much to add to a postcard because postcards are usually just like they are in real life, no editing necessary. __________________ Javelin Kills. Because something that big has to be worth shooting.

21-10-2009, 11:25 PM	#25342 (permalink)
EAUK_Aurora Community Representative Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Gender: Female Posts: 55,539 Blog Entries: 257	To ease the demands on the database we are starting a new Show Off your Latest Thread which can be found here > http://forums.electronicarts.co.uk/g...st-thread.html __________________ Aurora Community Representative Electronic Arts View past Signature Showcase entries Currently playing The Sims 3 and Brutal Legend Looking forward to The Sims 3 World Adventures