What program do you use? I love music too, see.
I like it, but it doesn't quite...fit?
as Mr_88.7 said, not quite mirror's edgy
The intro sound like the prelude to an area Faith has to escape from.
The piano is calming, like when Faith is climbing/jumping to a destination.
Then you've got the jazzy/techno (sorry, don't know the term
that doesn't fit in any situation!
just a sugestion, but why don't you take individual situations and compose to that mentality like, a puzzle over rooftops - calm with a soft beat in teh background, or a more aggressive situation, where faster music and beats are needed. Also, try to stick to a simple tune - think about Still Alive, and how it was used in the other songs in ME.
BTW, I like your 'deadman is alive' song"
Oh, and could you do your music in MP3 format? I'm not a member of youtube, but i'd like to download your music!
But keep on it
I'd like to see more of your music!